Menzu Namiaru was born in the village hidden in the Waterfall. And actually his real name wasn't Menzu Namiaru, it was Menzu Akimichi, son of Rikimaru Akimichi. Menzu almost never trained in Waterfall village, cause it was protected by the waterfall from other shinobi... Until the age of 8... When the own Waterfall village members rioted over the Hero's Water. The fight killed many people, but most affective to Menzu, was Rikimaru. In anger and sadness Menzu left the village and changed names to Menzu Namiaru, to hide all connections to Rikimaru and Waterfall village. Menzu walked and walked, until he met up in Leaf Village. But with not a warm welcome, when talked to the kage, he threw Menzu in jail. But, his Akimichi heritage had actually saved him in this case, Menzu was thrust into anger, and did the only two jutsu's he knew! BAIKA NO JUTSU! MEAT TANK!!!!! Then broke through leaf jail cell, and escaped the village by disguising himself once again. The Hokage was not pleased about Menzu's actions and called a Hunter-Nin squad, and near by villages(Mist) about him. Menzu easily head through Leafs weak Hunter-nin squad but when reached mist without knowing saw a kids at its gates... The kid stood there angry and crying, Menzu was very confused and scared about him... Then slowly saw a bone cutting through the flesh of the kids left wrist, pushing out like giant needle. The kid sat there stearing at Menzu now with the bone fully came out of his arm and in his hand. Menzu said, "Ughh, Hey! Are you alrigh- AHH!" The kid just ran at Menzu with deadly force! Menzu did the only thing he knew... Run! But in mid-5th step. The kid was already in front of him. He said, "Stop. Why do you run, hide? You will die no matter what." Menzu didn't know what to say, he was scared out of his mind and thought... And said, "Ugh... Ugh... I actually... I dont know..."... The kid was suprised at this response, for it was different than his usual respone such as, "AHH!", or "PLEASE DONT KILL ME!". So then he dropped the bone sword and said, "Chewyy, Chewyy Kaguya." Menzu's responed, "Wha...". The kid told him, "My name, its Chewyy Kaguya, yours?". Menzu agreeingly responded, "Oh, Menzu, Menzu Aki- ugh... Menzu Namiaru!". They talked and Menzu found out Chewyy was on a mission to hunt down a rouge missing-ninja. Menzu then found home in Mist Village, And took the Genin exam at 10 passed, Chuunin at 12 failed, then tried at 14 and passed. Then something intersting happened... When running through from the Mist Kage mansion after being declined a chance at Jounin, he didn't notice the person in front of him and ran straight into a man. They both fell and got up and shouted, "WATCH IT!". Then suprisingly they both sat there wide eyed looking at eachother. Menzu was very freaked out about how the guy looked, but Kisame was impressed how strong Menzu looked, not knowing his current rank/strength he asked, "What are you so mad about?". Menzu replied, "The Mizukage... I know I shouldn't be made at him, its just I cant help it...". Menzu was scared, for the guy looked like a human shark with a gigantic covered up blade. He replied with a very big sharp smile, "Hmmm... Perfect... Follow me kid"-But", Menzu interupted."NOW!" He demanded. They went into the deep dark downtown of Mist Village, where all the crooks and missing-nin hid... In the mist... As we were walking I noticed some people that i've heard about, one was a man with bandages wrapped around his face with a giant cleaving sword, next to him a small girlish-looking boy with empty eyes, and a sorta sad expression. I read about them, they were Zabuza, and Haku! And I noticed a man with two tanto looking blades with a blue kinda aura around them, i've seen this man before and know his name is Raiga. When then entered a house and everyone in there had giant swords. Zabuza was already in the room, but with no Haku. Then Raiga busted in. A man covered by a shadow said, "Hey Kisame whadda got there?". "Nothing to kill, its another member.". "But we already have 7, and I dont want to change our name!". Just give him a sword and we'll officially add him in when someone gets taken out..." The man next to me said. Then a man across the room and atop the stairs was walking down and through a giant cover with a sword inside at Menzu, and yelled, "Here ya go kid!".When Menzu caught it he fell on his back. Then the man next to him, Kisame, said with his sharp grin, "Hmmm... I'll have to train you".**Wil continue**
Though the training was vigerous, and dangerous Menzu did it anyways. He accepted Kisame as his sensei and they began training. At first, Menzu could barely weild his weapon, the Kiru-Hayashi. Menzu's first training was to climb mountains with only his palms. Menzu knew about this training in some cases people have died from it, so he rubbed his hands in the sand to get them dry as possible and boom! Menzu was cimbling up the rocky mountain edge like a pro! He yelled down to kisame, "Hey! This is easy!". Kisame just stood there and laughed, "Thats supposed to be, but this isn't your training!". Menzu was confused, people trained by climbing all the time. So he yelled back, "What is my training then?". No response. He could barely see Kisame cause of how high he already was up on the mountain. Then all of a sudden distinctively heard the words, "Kirigakure no Jutsu!". Menzu knew what was coming and knew it was bad. He looked down and was engulfed in the very dense Mist, then the rocky edges were getting slippery, so he started climbing faster till he heard a, "Suiton: Suikoudan no Jutsu!". Menzu was shocked as ever, what was Kisame trying to do kill him?! So Menzu was not at any rate to slow down he hurried as fast as he could till he could hurry the roar and crumbling of rock behind him, he had enough time to turn around and see the jutsu, "BOOOOSH!". The water smacked Menzu with 500 pounds of pressure banging his head and torso against the rocky edge. bleeding, injured and tired Menzu wanted to fall... "Suiton: Suikoudan no Jutsu!". Menzu was suprised and angry, so he forced himself past pain, past fatuige and concentrated his chakra into the only thing he knew... BAIKA NO JUTSU! Menzu now fully enlarged fell down towards the water shark, "BOOSH!". Menzu landed right on top of it the water shark still moving upwards with Menzu afloat then splashed into the mountain side. "MEAT TANK!!!" Menzu thrust his body into a fast spin as soon as he hit the mountain riding the water dragon, it was easier to climb this way now that its wet as he rolled upwards came to the top and said smiling, while rubbing the back of his head, "Hehehe what other easy training methods do we have to do?". Kisame answered, "None, this was easy, the others wont be...". As we started the new training methods such asrunnning across tidal waves by water walking, dodging water bullets, and sparring after about everyone he finally said, "The Seven Legendary Swordsman of the Mist have some important news...". Menzu stronger than ever before and now 17 was glad, he hadn't been to the Seven Mist Swordsman in 3 years. When he got there he was noticing it was havic, most where fighting and Zabuza and Haku were gone. So I asked, "Where did Zab- and mid word Raiga yelled, "Quite boy!" and threw one of his eletric knives so close to my face it almost shaved my chin. But everyone stopped. And looked at me, I wasn't that confused because it happened last time. Execpt that now they all looked shocked and admired, like they thought I was now strong, I had then noticed the the blade did cut me, but I had gotten such a keen defense that I didnt even notice, or move. So I grabbed the blade then threw it towards Raiga, who caught it(Like I expected)."Lets cut the crap" One of the members said. "Zabuza and Haku are dead, and Kisame is leaving to this Akatsuki group. We need new members and the kid is read-Another member interupted, "No he's not! He's just a kid". Raiga then argued, "My knife didnt even faze him- Another blurted, "It was a fluke! He was probably just toughning up in front of his traitor Kisame!". Then Kisame yelled, "I AM NOT A TRAITOR! I have no more use for this group." When this was said none of them would shutup all yelling some fighting and arguing. Until the shadowy man finnaly yelled, "STOP IT! We did not show up to argue we came to hire new recruits, we promised a kid a spot in and he's getting it!". Everyone shutup and got back in there chairs diappointed. Then Kisame led me to Zabuza's. Later that day the carved a cross threw my headband to show that I was not with mist anymore but yet with them. And sent me on my first mission, to kill a Chuunin from the Mist Village. The boy was exeptionally strong they suggest, so I should stay close and use my weapon. It was not hard to find him, he was bragging to people about his last mission he completed with his friends, so I watched him and waited till he was alone. Finnaly when walking home I knew it was time to strike, so I pulled out my blade, and used Shushin no Jutsu, to appear right behind him. I swung as fast as I could aiming for mid-torso and hit. It was a very gorey sight with blood oosing out from his side, then, "Poof!" a gust of smoke blew right there and I had fallen into a trap, I had no time to react only to see, that it was a kawarimi log with 5 well placed explosive tags on it. "BANG!" The explosion felt like an elephant fell on my chest, and that I had been laying in an oven. I quickly got up dazed, as he spun and kicked at my face with lightning speed it felt like, the kick was enough to wake me up and I was back in the fight. I started some handseals but he jumped at me and grabbed my arms, all I could think was, 'Damn this guys fast' then BAM! He swooped under my and tripped me with his legs then brought his elbow down on my face. He did not know that I had completed the handsigns though, "BAIKA NO JUTSU!". As he stood there and studied my inflated body I attached my sword to a speacial hook on my belt. He then remarked, "Eh, what a fatass.". Which got me pissed, "NOONE CALLS ME A FAT ASS!!! KURI-HAYASHI MEATTANK!!!"The sword was spinning with my body, and the hook was made so it spins in the other direction making me a human meat grinder, so I rolled at him at very high speeds then he kicked his foot out to stop me, getting cut every 2 seconds from the twirling blade. He then laughed and said, "Perfect right where I want you!". And preformed handseals with one hand while the other was holding 5 needles. He then said, "Suirou no Jutsu!" And instantly I was in a water ball still spinning but slowing down. I knew I could break out and started spinning faster which made water start to splash everywhere. Then he started to laugh so more as his other hand was put on the water ball and was all turned to ice. I was frozen solid in a ball, so I thought of a plan. I reverted from my baika state so I know have room in the ice ball. Then started laughing myself, as I did the jutsu, "Buban Baika no jutsu!" And enlarged my arm which it itself broke through the ice but still went to punch the guy, then raise my enlarged fist, and arm and slammed it down on him like a hammer. With no time to act, I grabbed my sword and did the handseals Chou Baika no jutsu(Enlargement technique) And me my sword and clothes grew about 10x our original size. So I stood the sword up and stabbed it down in the hole I made when punching him. Seeing blood squirt out and knowing this time it was for real. I reverted from that state hurt, tired, and running out of chakra, I ran home as quickly as I could. But then behind me I heard faint footsteps, as if they were very close but quite, not the oposite. So I turned looking at what it was, and I could make out what I know regretly now as, Mist Villages Hunter-Nin squad...
I hate the baika lol, YOUR MAKING PUT ALL THE CDLOTHS ON IT.lol akat suit is done, and im not editing it cuz i think it is good and doesn't need changing. (directs that to chewyy) but yea cooll character.
It looks weird cause the black arms just stick out and you made the arms really thick, just add a small pattern thing on one arm or so and yeah Menzu copying my idea! First your story then a fight...
